Dreams develop in every person and each dream is different for other people. Some people are willing to grasp their dream and some are too afraid go out there and do it. In the movie Tangled Rapunzel was able to catch her dream and she accomplished.
Tangled is your average fairy tale. Obviously the mode of this clip was a Romance, but in every story there is a point and it was not that hard to see it. Throughout the movie people have told her to live her dream, so it was pretty clear. Everyone can achieve their goal, but they have to be willing to do it.
As you grow older you have an idea what your dream is. Whether it's dreaming to be a basketball player, a poet, a pianist, or an actor. You have to remember that anythings possible. Rapunzel isn't afraid to follow her dream and I hope that you aren't afraid to follow yours either.
I think you could take this essay further. Talk about what YOU think, have another paragraph talking about what your thoughts on the topic. Also, you should remember to add an Author's Note, and you should make the title more interesting.
ReplyDeleteI really like the way you talked about everyone having a dream, and how we need to follow our dreams like Rapunzel. I also agree with Monica that you should expand a little more, talk about what you think, though. I would like to know more about why you thought it was Romance. I am still trying to decide whether I think it is Romance or Comedy, so I would like to hear your thoughts on this.
ReplyDeleteMonica definitely has a good point, you should write more about your thoughts. Don't forget an author's note as well. This is a good start, but I think you can take this further.
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